[找乐儿]

今天把他在学校里写的作文拿回来了，题目是“一片叶子的一生”，先是掉下来差点被人踩死，后来被医生治好伤愈出来后跟别的叶子玩捉迷藏还搞不清谁是谁。接着躲割草机没躲过去壮烈牺牲了～～～～～～～～这孩子也太悲观厌世了，这咋整呢～～～～～～～

原文是这样的

My life as a leaf

I fell in autumn and drifted through the air.
When I fell, somebody almost stepped on me.
At least he didn't. It would've been the end of my life.
Ahhhh! I was carried to the hospital. A doctor saved me.
I went where my friends were and we played hide-and-seek.
It was harder than the people way because sometime you don't know which leaf is who.
After all, I did get mixed up on whom I was hiding from.
I didn't know that I walked right past the seeker.
After a while, I heard a lawnmower.
When I looked, I went Ahhhh! And I ran away.
The lawnmower kept coming. I kept running.
Finally, I got chopped into pieces.

老师的评语“Poor leaf"~~~~~~~~~~~~

[春风沂水]

其实也不一定表现了他的心理忧郁。恰恰说明了他平时注意观察生活，值得好好培养

[registrant]

你儿子英文比我好。

[飞鱼]

这孩子太可爱了。为了尽量把故事写短一点，于是就让叶子提前壮烈了

[找乐儿]

你说谁家的阳光少年会那么写啊，一般都是写一片叶子飞啊飞飞到了一个美丽小姑娘的家里，然后被小姑娘夹进日记本里珍藏起来了吧

[飞鱼]

找乐儿 写道:

你说谁家的阳光少年会那么写啊，一般都是写一片叶子飞啊飞飞到了一个美丽小姑娘的家里，然后被小姑娘夹进日记本里珍藏起来了吧

这一般都是小姑娘才这么写

[花落花开]

飞鱼 写道:

这孩子太可爱了。为了尽量把故事写短一点，于是就让叶子提前壮烈了

[walleye]

这孩子，本来听说前两天调皮想领到俺家，一套咏春拳上下其身给他点颜色看看滴，今天看了这作文，觉得：


很哲学、学习了.......


咏春拳就算了，万一写成作文就...............

[小纯洁]

赶紧找个creative writing的班～～人才啊～

[找乐儿]

walleye 写道:

这孩子，本来听说前两天调皮想领到俺家，一套咏春拳上下其身给他点颜色看看滴，今天看了这作文，觉得： 很哲学、学习了....... 咏春拳就算了，万一写成作文就...............

俺儿子肯定写 Uncle Walleye was playing Crouching Tiger Hidden Dragon with me